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Inziee
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8/23/2017 9:48:16 AM
"I WISH I WAS DEAD" my new song.
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Father Time
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8/23/2017 2:42:23 PM
Well you certainly have no trouble expressing yourself. I'd add that the intro was sort of abrasive to my ears, some people listening may switch off before they get to your vocals.
The bigger question is, dude, I hope you're not pondering suicide? Understand that you have it better than so many, since you clearly have music in your life.
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Inziee
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8/23/2017 9:11:20 PM
I wanted to make a song a little dramatic. But i think I screwed up with the intro...
I really appreciate your concern. I dont have any suicidal tendencies. Its just that I wrote this song on a very bad day. Anyways Thank you so much for taking the time to listen. Thanks a lot...
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Stoneman
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8/25/2017 3:24:47 PM
Thought this was going to be somber and sad but it didn't feel that way. The lyrics are rather somber but the beat is very upbeat and happy. It would have been more relative with a slower more sad music backing. But the lyrics were credible and the song is even danceable. The problem is that I am not sure you would want people dancing to a song with this message. I hope this is not a cry for help! Please don't hurt yourself. Talk to someone first. I do understand though. By the time I had reached 20 years old I had already had 3 suicide attempts. On one occasion I was in a coma for 3 days after a heroine overdose. Thank God I came out of it though. My life has turned out so much better than I thought it would. I am so happy now. I pray that someday you will find the kind of happiness that I found. I am living proof that it is worth it to keep living.
Much Respect,
Stoneman
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