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Tom O'Brien
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8/29/2009 8:23:06 PM
Rough mix of a new tune
This is called "Platitudes."
I stil have to record some electric guitar on it, but thought I'd share it at this stage.
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Richard Scotti
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8/30/2009 6:47:02 AM
Nice chord changes, good melody. Post it again when it's finished. Kinda reminds me of R.E.M.
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Jeff Allen Myers
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8/30/2009 8:29:00 AM
Yea, there is one chord that is unexpected, creates a nice dissonance that resolves.
I like the song Tom... I would nix the "AAH" backing vox, something is not sitting right., the other harmonies sound great. Have you tried a little compression on your lead Vocal, a couple phrases jump out and a bit of compression would help them sit in the mix.
I am just throwing out suggestions as you indicated it was a rough mix. They are just initial gut reactions...
I think it has great potential.
Regards,
Jeff
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Tom O'Brien
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8/30/2009 8:45:30 PM
Thanks for the comments, guys. I'll take them into consideration.
I realized I forgot to post a link to the song, so for those of you who want to go straight there: http://www.iacmusic.com/songs.aspx?SongID=78394&ArtistID=128691
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