Bob Elliott
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9/15/2019 2:41:35 PM
I’m a big fan of hip hop, and you seem like you could get a flow, but right now it’s like everything is going all at once and staying that way all the way through. Some cut backs would help. You’re kind of buried. Cut back to be able to hear just one of you on vox( no voice double) would help. Just kind of anonymous right now.
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Bob Elliott
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9/15/2019 3:12:21 PM
Like, with the flow of the rap, too, it comes at me nonstop with mostly the same meter all through. Stopping and making us wait, changinging up the pace and rhythm of delivery/ these things make us tune in.
What I listened to was first song on your page.
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