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Father Time
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7/14/2022 1:44:42 AM
Write a great first line of lyrics for a new song.
3 rules
1. You never have to finish it.
2. If someone else wants to use it they are allowed, but they must keep that to themselves. Do not post any additions to their lyrics here.
3. No crediting is required if 2.
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Father Time
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7/14/2022 1:46:41 AM
ok I'll start:
His pretense was as naked as himself in the dead of night
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jinguan
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7/14/2022 3:27:03 AM
oke, I am next
you're like phantasm, just feel but can't see clearly.
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Bloxorz
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Flygirl
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7/14/2022 6:52:47 AM
Even if you clip my wings I may never touch the ground
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negative tendencies
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7/14/2022 12:00:10 PM
We're the biggest in the land, unless you count Paul Bunyan
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jingo
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7/14/2022 3:18:08 PM
the distance between them the work of a lifetime
a wall without windows too tired to climb
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Paul groover
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7/14/2022 4:55:21 PM
Surreal sunset as you pretend you know about life
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Father Time
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7/14/2022 5:15:48 PM
I don't know what you guys think but I thought all of those were great.
Jingo that was some potent phrasing there.
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Paul groover
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7/14/2022 5:54:08 PM
His pretense was as naked as himself in the dead of night
you're like phantasm, just feel but can't see clearly
Even if you clip my wings I may never touch the ground
We're the biggest in the land, unless you count Paul Bunyan
the distance between them the work of a lifetime
a wall without windows too tired to climb
Surreal sunset as you pretend you know about life
cool
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Paul groover
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7/14/2022 6:03:58 PM
I was emotional and felt homeward bound
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Choosy Susie
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7/14/2022 9:56:17 PM
---- Updated 7/14/2022 11:41:04 PM
Interesting
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Most of the above lyrics have a psychedelic feel even though the original request just said "a great first line for a new song"
Can't imagine these words in a good ol' Country song for example so how about
"Mama keeps a rusty bucket by the kitchen door"
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Avery Dumpling Jr.
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7/15/2022 6:28:33 AM
I made it round the mountain just in time to see your ass
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Francesca Tamellini
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7/15/2022 2:41:00 PM
That one tells a story. Sneaking up on someone’s donkey……
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Child_of_Pleiades
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7/15/2022 5:13:48 PM
hehe
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Stoneman
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7/15/2022 8:47:37 PM
Papa keeps a sawed off shotgun underneath the bathroom floor
Jesus never came to visit us for sure
because the evil in our hearts was there forever more.
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