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6/12/2018 5:35:23 AM
he awakens



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Don Juan Junior

6/12/2018 5:35:23 AM

he awakens

I have been on this earth a very long time and I often wonder if I would be better served by measuring time based on the women I have loved in my spotted lifetime. Should I do that, however, only one woman would constitute most of the years, months, days, hours, seconds. I believe now, it took me this long, that great love might last forever, in memory, but actual day-to-day love simply cannot. The reason I have concluded this is that my loveblood flow has drifted down a stream where the ultimate goddess stands waiting. She is not perfect, or so I often think, but then suddenly she turns her head one way, an expression comes over her, and I have that feeling again - the feeling that I must possess her. It simply must be. I get lost in that thought and it is a safe haven for me, it becomes the only path I must serve. I start to imagine and I eventually realize that I have not truly kissed a woman for decades upon decades, I even doubt that I would remember how to do it. and I am soon in my thoughts walking on green grass talking to said goddess, not really a deep conversation at all, but the moment is overwhelmed by this tandem awareness (between her and me) that right here, right now, neither of us has the slightest desire to be anywhere else. We reach the edge of the water and can walk no further and I turn to face her. I know what I am thinking but my words speak on their own, I made no conscious decision to say this. "Can I kiss you?" There is a short hesitation which seems infinite. She does not answer. but as I am looking into her eyes, I feel at first a tiny bit and then gradually more that I see.. a gleam. Again without a conscious thought, my head moves forward, our lips make contact, and the world explodes.


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Jilly

6/12/2018 6:37:19 AM



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Don Juan Junior

6/12/2018 7:50:58 AM


Ah, I see I've brought you to your knees.


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Jilly

6/12/2018 11:37:12 AM


Well a girl gets to know her place in life


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Don Juan Junior

6/12/2018 12:26:50 PM



You sure do know how to break a mood!


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Stoneman

6/13/2018 4:57:45 PM


Damn Jilly. Was it really that bad?


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Sir Romeo

6/14/2018 3:33:37 AM


She has been jaundiced by that castaway lover Don Juan, who I find to be utterly inarticulate. He doth not commence to know how to put forth the language of love. To him it is a tactile fantasy, but to me, Sir Romeo, it is like fireflies in a jar. The iid of the jar must have airholes, however. Do not allow any hellgramites in said jar though, or they will destroy said fireflies. What forsooth Don Juan to brutishly refer to them as "lightning bugs:?

It is with a temporing of the spirit that I cast my sword of love towards the woman who liked my beckoning utterance of love on Twitter. All I did was express myself soontaneously, like a simple breath of air, and it proceeded to, surprisingly move her, even in her lofty realm where I never expected to penetrate her cauldron.


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Verity

6/14/2018 9:25:18 AM


And you, Sir, remindeth me more of a fart in a colander, knowing not from which hole to exit. Thou art surely confusing your whither from your dither and ending up with nither.

Brother Casanova would turn you both into trembling dilettantes, mere dabblers in the true art of missives d'amour. Your billet doux are billet don'ts. Your transparent furbelow is far below the standard to which a lady of breeding and beauty would ever consider from a prospective suitor.

Forsooth 'tis the truth, thou art too long in the tooth

Throw yourselves on your swords and let's be done with this flatulent flummery.


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Sir Romeo

6/14/2018 10:59:50 AM


Why doth ye speaketh of farts on a calendar, it is not July yet.


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Stoneman

6/14/2018 1:39:20 PM


Boy, these IMP girls are rough. Do not try to get with them because they will only castrate your feelings. Stay single and have peace of mind. Empathy is not a strong draw around here. Would be lovers should just keep going to the free dating sites. Not that those elaborate words will work there either but at least you will find some women that are interested in ya. Just say'n.....


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wizard of oz

6/14/2018 2:46:55 PM


I rather like strong assertive women, ones that call it as it is, it turns me on, big time boing


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