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5/15/2017 9:46:52 PM

Love Somebody
Got some new software Presonus Studio one Pro. and Superior Drummer
This is my first tune on it...
Any critiques appreciated.
It's a bit busy considering it started out as just an acoustic song...

https://www.dropbox.com/s/dwqg4sm38bseqyi/Love%20somebody%20.mp3?dl=0


Cheers and beers!


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Bryon Tosoff

5/16/2017 12:36:11 PM


hey Jeff,good you got you software, and having the percussion thing helps out a lot.

I Like the concept with that cool laid back groove easy feel ,, tasty acoustic guitar and that neat hook with a kinda string synth , also liked the electric guitar part at intro and later on, that too could be more there, piano part was a nice addition too in places, dig that percussion sounds good.

you could bump up vocals a bit more and perhaps start earlier with them,a 30 second intro prior to vox to me was long, I do like what you have done . Also staying on the root works although a more definitive change up would offer the song a more interesting touch, like a more compelling bridge or something or break it down as in the start,for a bit in the middle of the song, but then maybe you did that, I listened like 5 times, really like the acoustic guitar , lovely tone and texture there.

I do see it growing into a good tune, experimenting and building and crafting this one will yield a fine compositions and by the way, nice new toys,


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JeffH

5/16/2017 9:44:34 PM


Hey Bryon thanks for giving the listens and the critique...
I'd have to agree with most of your comments ... I think I may have even played a kitchen sink somewhere in there. ;-)
Vocals are kind of weak.. so I hide them a bit in the mix... I've thought about adding a different bridge or maybe just modulate... it does need some change.
I'll get back to it someday...
Thanks again.


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