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8/23/2016 6:05:55 PM
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Hey Pasquale,
Nice tune... sounds a lot like today's pop to me... from the structure and phrasing etc...
I like the build at the 2 minute mark but when you pause on the singing would be nice to hear whatever instrument is moving the song a little higher in the mix. Not the piano. Sounds like a strum maybe guitar. Kind of discernible to me old ears.
Only other thing I would add is maybe a better string keyboard... I'm reaching now but the sound quality is lacking because of the instrument quality.
But most important you have a really good song. People should be able to relate!
Nice job...
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