Bryon Tosoff
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5/16/2017 12:36:11 PM
hey Jeff,good you got you software, and having the percussion thing helps out a lot.
I Like the concept with that cool laid back groove easy feel ,, tasty acoustic guitar and that neat hook with a kinda string synth , also liked the electric guitar part at intro and later on, that too could be more there, piano part was a nice addition too in places, dig that percussion sounds good.
you could bump up vocals a bit more and perhaps start earlier with them,a 30 second intro prior to vox to me was long, I do like what you have done . Also staying on the root works although a more definitive change up would offer the song a more interesting touch, like a more compelling bridge or something or break it down as in the start,for a bit in the middle of the song, but then maybe you did that, I listened like 5 times, really like the acoustic guitar , lovely tone and texture there.
I do see it growing into a good tune, experimenting and building and crafting this one will yield a fine compositions and by the way, nice new toys,
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