Richard Scotti
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9/6/2010 3:45:26 PM
---- Updated 9/6/2010 5:57:15 PM
Good concept, deep lyrics, nice chorus....The present structure: Verse, Chorus, Verse, Bridge, Chorus would sound better (IMO) if it were Verse, Chorus, Verse, Chorus, Bridge, Chorus/outro. It seems to flow better that way but that's just one man's opinion.
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