Tom O'Brien
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11/11/2012 9:46:12 AM
Some more new rock
This rock stuff has been creeping into my head lately, probably as an antidote to the more old fashioned stuff I've also been working on, and which I'll post soon.
Give this song a listen and let me know how you might change the mix, or if it works as is.
Wating for You to Come
Also, should it be called:
I'm Still Waiting for You to Come
or Still Waiting for You to Come
or Waiting for You to Come?
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Steve April
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11/11/2012 12:55:28 PM
hi tom,
gotta run at the moment...maybe a work in progress...
wow, the chorus. very fresh and musical, w a touch of a john lennon edge perhaps.
kinda loses energy on the verses, esp. verse 1, imy humble view.
vivid images, there, maybe, to keep the narrative movin' along...
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Stoneman
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11/11/2012 6:06:40 PM
First of all, any of those titles works for me. Very interesting effects on the vocals for this song. Not sure of what you were going for but it has an intriguing and strange quality to it. I kind of like it. As always with you, the song has some very good lyrics. You always write songs that appear to be simple in message but make you realize that you need to look closer in order to fully comprehend what you are saying. In this case I am not sure that I fully got what you intended but I ain't the brightest bush in the forest. Good Song Though! Good musical accompaniments and song format. Personally, I would dial back the bass so the other instruments can have more room but that's a producers decision. No right or wrong on that. Just a matter of taste.
Much Respect,
Stoneman
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