Jeff Allen Myers
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9/21/2009 1:28:42 AM
Nice Tom, Like the Chorus.. Verse sounds familiar, I can't put my finger on it. I think this would sound great with just an eggshaker..The drums detract as it really is not grooving with the chords. The snare is not working in th versus, the chorus is ok, but I would lose the drums in the intro and versus. Just a suggestion... it's a well written tune, its just an arrangement issue.
Nice Vocal, sang very well. Nice Song, dug it. Jeff
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Tom O'Brien
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9/21/2009 1:37:24 PM
Thanks for the feedback, Jeff. You may be right, it might not need that driving drum all the way through. Believe it or not, I don't own an egg shaker. But I love them, so that may be next weekend's musical purchase.
Tom
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