Monkey68
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10/7/2008 4:37:56 PM
Two new live demo tracks for your ears
UNtitled and Open & Here.
I left the original studio demos on my page, so that the more clinically inclined can A-B between the versions.
Feedback, as ever, will be treated as a gift.
Vince (Monkey68)
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Hop On Pop
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10/8/2008 4:54:53 AM
First off, "Untitled" is an amazing tune! Dark, pretty pop that is very reminiscent of Teenage Fanclub; and there's nothing wrong with that.
Opportunities for improvement: Watch the vocal pitch. I think that you have a wonderful voice, but you tend to waver off-tune just enough to be distracting every now and then -- in particular during the notes that you're holding for a longer stretch.
But that said, I hate you. This song is excellent!
"Open & Here"
Is even darker. Maybe a little more Elvis Costello or Joe Jackson then the Fannies. And again, the same criticism. Just pay attention to that a little and you'll have something pretty special.
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