LyinDan
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11/26/2010 9:38:16 PM
Can you stand a little constructive criticism? I hope so, cuz you should know I think you're great!
The first and third verses. I think you should change the 3rd/4th lines. Just too similar. Casual listener thinks you're just repeating. As a disinterested third party, in a song construction way, I'd almost agree with him, unless the music really provided a change there. I know what you're doing, but...
Chorus, and this is not a criticism, I really hear a lush harmony there. I hope you do, too. :)
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