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Tom O'Brien
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4/22/2012 8:54:46 AM
"Ordinary Girl" is just acoustic guitars and voices - give it a listen!
This is a new song of mine that I really tried several arrangements of before settling on this one. I'm still sticking to my recent idea of just getting the vocals and guitars right, so even though it's a pretty full arrangement, it's only those two elements. Hope you like it.
Ordinary Girl
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Stoneman
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4/22/2012 11:36:32 AM
Wow, Tom your lyrics often leave me stunned! This song is no exception to that. Yours is a voice that speaks in levels beyond the norm. This song is truly proof that you are not an ordinary songwriter.
Much Respect To You Man!
Stoneman
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Richard Scotti
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4/22/2012 5:03:21 PM
---- Updated 4/23/2012 8:22:45 AM
Great words on the page....but can't really hear many of them in this style of production. Nonetheless, it's a very ambitious song with great potential. The overly other-worldly reverb/delay/echo, etc is interesting but overwhelms the structure of the song which becomes somewhat amorphous and less direct. Still, with a few tweaks, it could all come together nicely. Your work reminds me so much of Graham Nash, who I greatly admire.
Just the way Dylan told the Beatles to step up their game lyrically, your lyrics are a powerful reminder to all of us that words matter. Keep up the good work as you dig deeper and deeper into a subconscious excavation where all the mysteries of life are buried.
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Tom O'Brien
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4/24/2012 7:26:28 PM
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Richard, I really appreciate your feedback on the production choices. I'm always looking for a new sound and I don't always know how to get it. Maybe I should try to achieve more of what I sound like live - I always think my live shows are so much better than my recordings. I may play with the effects a while and see if I can come up with a new mix. I also greatly admire Graham Nash. Songs for Beginners is one of my favorite albums. Thanks for the comparison.
Update: I've remixed the song with a much drier feel and I think I like this better. Give it another listen and see what you think.
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Richard Scotti
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5/1/2012 12:08:24 PM
Tom ~Sounds great! I can hear the influences of CS&N, Buffalo Springfield and even Joni Mitchell. Thanks for keeping the 60's alive!
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