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Steve White
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9/10/2016 1:31:57 PM
---- Updated 9/12/2016 10:37:15 AM
Ken from Two Silo Complex's Ehoes Of Yor. New and final mix
Ken Carlisle came up with some great words on this so I decided to put it to music.
It's on my page now so please give this a listen. This is a totally new mix and I think the final
Here are the words, slightly changed to accommodate the music.
Echoes of Yor
Echoes keep bouncing off the inside of my head
Memories of the things we never did
Like a cloud lingering but never rains
The second chances that well never have again
Your gone into the great beyond and sailed the seven seas
We’re on the beach head in our misery
Each wave another grain of sand
How many grains are left how, many grains are left…
Before there’s …… no place left to stand
Are we fools longing for what could have been
Looking at scars that made us bleed so red
Seems just few drops as it trickles to the floor
But when we look down we see so much more.
Your gone into the great beyond and sailed the seven seas
We’re on the beach head in our misery
Each wave another grain of sand
How many grains are left how, many grains are left…
Before there’s …… no place left to stand
Don't tell me nothing, fill my head with dreams
Nightmares today have filled the air with screams
When all the screams are gone silence is so much worse
Some days a blessing most a curse
Your gone into the great beyond and sailed the seven seas
We're on the beach head in our misery
Each wave another grain of sand
How many grains are left how, many grains are left…
Before there’s …… no place left to stand
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Two Silo Complex
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9/10/2016 1:57:16 PM
Its fantastic Steve I have no words to explain it. Brought tears to my eyes.
Two Silo Complex,
Ken
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Steve White
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9/10/2016 2:04:56 PM
Thank you Ken
I'm very glad you liked it. I wrote this with the most solemn chords I could find to fit.
Very hard to sing. I may do the vocal over but I'm scared to mess up what I hear as simply magic. :)
Steve
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Bryon Tosoff
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9/10/2016 2:23:13 PM
Impressive work from both artists, Ken's Lyrics Steve's rendering of the song, and great singing. very moving, added to the eYe
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Steve White
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9/10/2016 2:37:02 PM
Thank you Bryon
I'm very happy you found it worthy of your station too.
Thank you very much for the comments.
Steve
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SILVERWOODSTUDIO
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9/10/2016 3:40:03 PM
congratulations to you both---magic in the air
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Richard Scotti
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9/10/2016 3:50:23 PM
cool collab! That's the spirit!
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Steve White
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9/10/2016 3:54:00 PM
Thanks Rob
I was going to add a thank you on your station page but couldn't find a place to do that.
Thanks Richard
I'm very glad you listened and commented.
Steve
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LyinDan
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9/10/2016 4:49:38 PM
Well, it is hard to sing. Don't be scared.
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Steve White
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9/10/2016 5:16:32 PM
Thanks Dan
I really don't understand what you mean?
Gee I hope I didn't sound scared singing this, I was looking for soft and sorrowful.
Steve
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Steve White
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9/10/2016 5:28:16 PM
LOL
I get it now Dan!
Yeah I know. Do you think I should do the vocal over?
I'm torn on this.
Steve
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LyinDan
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9/10/2016 5:33:49 PM
I'd give it another shot, take the best take :)
Relax
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Steve White
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9/10/2016 6:00:23 PM
I'll sleep on it but I'm thinking I should try another take.
Thanks Dan
Steve
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Steve White
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9/11/2016 4:36:27 PM
I decided I would follow Dan's suggestion and do another vocal. It's pitchy and I need to fix the ending. It will not affect the stations that have it up on cause I do know how to just change the file when I upload the new version.
Thanks for all the kind comments!
I'm hoping to work on this tomorrow.
ps.
If you want to add it to a station please do, you'll get the updated one so grab it now if you like it.
Steve
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Two Silo Complex
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9/11/2016 6:46:04 PM
Steve
I like everything you did the simple changes to the lyrics were spot on.
Your performance was very moving the cadence and the chords you used were perfect. It had great emotion. I look forward to your updated version.
I won't tell the story of the lyrics until after Steve posts the update.
Thanks again Steve you captured this magically.
Two Silo Complex,
Ken
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Steve White
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9/12/2016 9:05:47 AM
Working on it now Ken. :)
Steve
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Steve White
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9/12/2016 10:38:48 AM
Ok, I'm pretty sure this is the final. Please give this one a listen.
I hope you all like it. Thank you to Ken Carlisle for the great words.
Steve
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Steve White
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9/13/2016 5:42:20 AM
so far there are 4 stations playing this song.
eYe, INDIE SPIRIT, Radio Ready and Featured Songs.
Very happy to wake up this morning and see the adds.
Thank you very much for adding me to your stations.
Steve
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Two Silo Complex
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9/13/2016 8:34:35 AM
Steve what you have done with this is really fantastic. The station adds only go to show as proof of the effort you put in. I am happy to have been a part of something so wonderful and I hope it continues to be a great success for you.
Two Silo Complex,
Ken
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Steve White
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9/13/2016 4:24:55 PM
Thanks Ken :)
It was your words that inspired my music so not a small thing.
I hope this one goes far.
Steve
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LyinDan
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9/13/2016 8:07:17 PM
Well, that was a very credible job! I liked the guitar there, too.
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Steve White
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9/14/2016 12:23:01 PM
Hey thanks Dan! I'm very glad you liked it.
I'll be making a video with this song in the background. More on that later.
Steve
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