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Two Silo Complex
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8/30/2016 12:09:15 PM
---- Updated 9/5/2016 7:14:01 PM
Echos of Yor (ring no more)
Echos of Yor (ring no more)
echos keep bouncing off the inside of my head
the memories of all the things that we never did
like a dark cloud that lingers but never brings the rain
all these second chances that well never have again
Your gone into the great beyond and sailed the seven seas
we are left here on the beach head in our misery
each wave takes with it another grain of sand
just how many grains are left before there is no place left to stand
are we are fools longing for what could have been
picking at the scab that makes us bleed crimson
it seems a its just few drops as it trickles to the floor
when we look down we see the puddle form
Your gone into the great beyond and sailed the seven seas
we are left here on the beach head in our misery
each wave takes with it another grain of sand
just how many grains are left before there is no place left to stand
Don't tell me about tomorrow and fill my mind with dreams
The nightmare that is today has filled the air with screams
when at last the screams are gone the silence is far worse
some say each days a blessing but these days they seem a curse
Your gone into the great beyond and sailed the seven seas
we are left here on the beach head in our misery
each wave takes with it another grain of sand
just how many grains are left before there is no place left to stand
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LyinDan
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8/30/2016 4:16:38 PM
OK I really like the line "each wave takes with it another grain of sand
just how many grains are left before there is no place left to stand"
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Shoe City Sound
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8/30/2016 5:22:13 PM
Brillant lyrics, Ken!
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Two Silo Complex
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8/31/2016 7:14:03 PM
Thanks Shoe city sound and Lyin Dan
I think my favorite lines are:
"are we are fools longing for what could have been
picking at the scab that makes us bleed crimson"
and
"each wave takes with it another grain of sand"
"just how many grains are left before there is no place left to stand"
I won't go into too much detail but I will say these were written in a recent time of the parting of a loved one.
I will also say if either of you want to use the lyrics in a song you are welcome to do so.
Two Silo Complex,
Ken
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Steve White
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9/1/2016 10:42:35 AM
Pretty good words Ken.
Like them all.
Steve
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Shoe City Sound
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9/1/2016 11:03:51 AM
Thanks :)
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Two Silo Complex
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9/1/2016 6:15:19 PM
Thanks for your comments Steve.
I can hear the melody in my head maybe someday I can make something out of it.
Two Silo Complex,
Ken
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Father Time
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9/1/2016 9:49:18 PM
pretty good lyrics!
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Two Silo Complex
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9/2/2016 11:58:28 AM
Hey FT thank you for the kind words.
If either you or Steve want to do something with it your welcome. This once hits pretty close to home for me so I don't know if or when Ill be able to do something with it.
Its free reign with with it use it however it moves you.
Two Silo Complex,
Ken
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Steve White
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9/2/2016 12:18:38 PM
I'll take a shot at it next week after the holiday.
No promises though. :)
Does it have to be word for word or can I add or subtract as needed?
Steve
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Two Silo Complex
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9/4/2016 12:46:16 PM
Steve,
Its an honor. Add, subtract, take any parts that suit you bend it to your will so that it may live where others have parted.
Two Silo Complex,
Ken
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Shaz B
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9/4/2016 1:40:32 PM
Those lyrics are wonderful. They strike me as poignant but subtle, if that makes any sense.
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SILVERWOODSTUDIO
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9/4/2016 3:09:38 PM
clever and poignant ----you have got some deep imagery in these lines
minor chords perhaps ?
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Two Silo Complex
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9/5/2016 7:11:02 PM
---- Updated 9/5/2016 7:13:04 PM
Thank you Shaz b and Silverwood
Its been too difficult for me to try to perform it but it might be in a minor key and probably is.
Theses dark times I'm cast upon the wind. Each new breath dashes me on the rocks again.
If anyone wants to take a swing at these in whole or in part you are welcome do do so.
Two Silo Complex.
Ken
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Marc Ceccotti
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9/6/2016 4:26:01 PM
Beautiful lyrics, pure poetry...
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Two Silo Complex
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9/7/2016 9:10:14 AM
Thank you for your kind words Marc. The response to this has been warm and I thank each of you for taking the time and appreciating these words for what they are and how they fall.
"The tigers growing restless pacing in his cage but I no longer fear him as I turn this blood stained page"
Two Silo Complex,
Ken
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Steve White
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9/9/2016 9:22:53 AM
Gonna take a shot at this now. Have my gear hooked up. Will let you know when/if I get something.
Steve
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Steve White
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9/9/2016 11:06:33 AM
Ok Ken
It's working out really well! Yes I did have to make some lyric changes but I won't post them till I have a rough draft with vocals to post so I'll keep you all in suspense!
I totally think you'll love this Ken but like everything time will tell on that.
Steve
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Two Silo Complex
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9/9/2016 6:54:05 PM
That is really great Steve I look forward to your take on it.
Thank you for your efforts,
Two Silo Complex,
Ken
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Steve White
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9/10/2016 9:53:45 AM
Ok Ken
I have a mix. Do you want me to post it here or start a new topic?
Steve
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Two Silo Complex
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9/10/2016 1:12:35 PM
Hi Steve whichever way you go with it is fine with me. The way see it is the song is your creation. I just helped providing a base of the lyrics.
Two Silo Complex,
Ken
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Steve White
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9/10/2016 1:22:47 PM
Ok Ken
I'll start a new topic. Stay tuned, will have it up in a few.
Steve
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Two Silo Complex
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9/11/2016 7:07:44 PM
I revised my lyrics slightly and created a bridge after hearing Steve's version which is fantastic.
Echos of Yor (ring no more)
These echos keep bouncing off the inside of my head
with the memories of all the things that we never did
like a dark cloud that lingers but never brings the rain
and all these second chances that well never have again
Your gone into the great beyond and sailed the seven seas
we are left here on the beach head in our misery
each wave takes with it another grain of sand
how many grains are left ...
before there's .... no place left to stand
Echos of Yor we can't ignore
Echos of Yor ring no more
are we are fools longing for what could have been
picking at the scars that make us bleed so red
seems its just few drops as it trickles to the floor
but when we look down we see the puddle form
Your gone into the great beyond and sailed the seven seas
we are left here on the beach head in our misery
each wave takes with it another grain of sand
how many grains are left ...
before there's .... no place left to stand
Echos of Yor we can't ignore
Echos of Yor ring no more
Don't tell me about tomorrow fill my mind with dreams
The nightmare that is today has filled the air with screams
when at last the screams are gone the silence is far worse
some say each days a blessing but some days they seem a curse
Your gone into the great beyond and sailed the seven seas
we are left here on the beach head in our misery
each wave takes with it another grain of sand
how many grains are left ...
before there's .... no place left to stand
how many grains are left ...
before there's .... no place left to stand
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