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Bob Elliott
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3/10/2018 2:56:50 PM
Faces (rough early stage 3/10/18)
This is Soundcloud because it's not even close to being ready to put up here yet. Just briefly showing how that lyric turned out on the song.
The faces they change as they grow
Seasons come, seasons go
And all of the faces you show
I can dig it, baby
Just let me know
I'm not here to argue
or make myself clear
What did you hear?
Was it love, love?
Love is gonna draw me near
'cause under the moonlight, blue night
I just want you to be with me
Whenever the rain falls
any time at all
I just need you to be with me
Everyone has their own thing
But who can fly with a broken wing?
Patience, and kindness and soul
we can dig it, baby
feels like home
We don't want to argue
or make ourselves clear
What did you hear?
Was it love, love?
Love is gonna draw us near
'cause under the moonlight, blue night
I just want you to be with me
Whenever the rain falls
any time at all
I just need you to be with me
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Shoe City Sound
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3/10/2018 3:17:04 PM
This is gorgeous as is. I sure hope that little instrumental ending makes it to the final version. What a beautiful song!
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Bob Elliott
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3/10/2018 6:02:07 PM
Thanks. Just roughed out right now, but I wanted to show the song I had that thread about the lyric that I couldn’t get written.
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Stoneman
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3/14/2018 4:53:44 PM
That is turning out quite nicely. I like it a lot! Much Respect, Stoneman
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Bob Elliott
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3/14/2018 5:52:09 PM
Thanks Stoneman,
I've been messing with it last couple of nights, and I am quickly finding very little else can be added without it taking away from what I have.
One thing is on those choruses I do that little pause in the riff, but I don't really like that pause. That was something new I tried that morning.
I tried doing that riff in electric guitar an octave up, and its jangly and cool, but once I get past the sonic shininess, I realize it's better in acoustic. Acoustic is kind of my voice, I guess.
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Steve Ison
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3/15/2018 11:06:39 AM
Beautiful song Bob...Soulful, heartfelt, sunny n melodic -Whats not to like ? Agree that instrumental section at the end should definitely stay
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Bob Elliott
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3/20/2018 5:19:22 PM
Thanks man. I've replayed a lot of it, and I'm about one mix away from done. Should have it finished by tonight.
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