Bryon Tosoff
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6/4/2017 10:05:15 AM
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Hey Jeff, you are finding your groove lately with these dropbox releases, your singing has improved, basically because you are feeling more confident and letting it go. your singing reminds me of Bob Seger or The Boss. little edgy but still actually better :) keep developing your singing chops. The Storyline is strong, bringing and singing about something that is real, and that actually happened in your life, catchy chorus, lonely girl, its a sing along tune, for sure, the lyrics are well woven , pretty clean production ,i like how you kept it guitar driven, suits your style, although in places this could use a nice hammond patch to support the song in a tasty minimal way. So best presentation of your new found vibe so far, this has a good radio feel. The gritty guitar and straight ahead percussion with just there bass work holds it together nicely. I like it. coming here to IMP and elsewhere perhaps, nice one man
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Bryon Tosoff
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6/6/2017 2:14:37 PM
---- Updated 6/6/2017 3:35:04 PM
Oh you can sing, Jeff, dont sell yourself short, i rather like this last one, your vocals work well
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