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Cash Cow
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5/8/2008 4:37:45 AM
A song that's gotten virtually no play
So, yeah... it's actually been "officially retired" from my repertoire, but I'm still curious if anyone actually digs this:
"Carlen, Another Day"
And now, back to your regularly scheduled programming.
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5/8/2008 6:18:50 AM
Todd, you have had a half of a listen now. The only reason I didn't carry on with it was because after the powerful intro the vocal seemed too modest and I was struggling to make out the lyrics but I always have trouble in that dept. Maybe it just slipped through the net because you uploaded it at a busy time or something - it was certainly as good as many other songs that have received attention. Maybe double your vox track and push it up front...or just move on, as you say.
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Hugh Hamilton
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5/8/2008 6:22:17 AM
I like that basic groove, Todd, and I'll agree that it's a strain to get the vocals - boost those babies, Amigo! I've been saying this a lot around here lately - but I'm totally hearing room for backing vocals and lead guitars...I know a guy who does that stuff fast and cheap...
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Richard Scotti
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5/8/2008 8:25:29 AM
I usually don't pick a song apart for analysis unless I'm asked to do so by the writer.
So since you asked......This has the potential of being a great song! The problem is not with the song but with the production. But this is a perfect example of how a "wrong" production can destroy the appeal of a very worthy song. First the obvious, as all have said, the vocals are much too low. I love the power chords but they are either too loud or the drums are not loud enough. The arrangement could use a little tweaking as well. The song builds beautifully but then when we get to the words "another day" which is presumbably the chorus/title line, it's a let down. The words "another day" should have be extended like "another daaaaaaay! with a big resolving
to back it up. Perhaps even repeat the line. So pump up the vocals, let's hear that drummer, and punch up the chorus! DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS SONG! I wouldn't say it if I didn't believe it.
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Richard Scotti
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5/8/2008 8:33:29 AM
I wish that editing feature was working. I hate making typos!
These phrases should read: "The words "another day" should be extended........
and "with a big resolving CHORD". Geez, this typo thing gets embarrassing but I'm working it!
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Hop On Pop
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5/8/2008 9:00:47 AM
Richard (or anyone else)...
Please have a go at it. Carlen was the girl who broke my heart just before I met my wife and I've retired the song out of respect for her. (It's always bugged her.)
So, let me know if you want to have a go at it, and I'll send you a copy of those buried lyrics.
You just gotta credit me and pay me my due if it becomes a hit!
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Beth Fridinger
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5/8/2008 10:29:12 PM
Maybe you should redo the song with a different name....that's too bad...
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Richard Scotti
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5/9/2008 12:05:13 PM
I think your wife should be more understanding about your need for artistic expression and honesty in your work. Maybe it's time you wrote a love song about your wife and how she made you forget all about Carlen. In any case, a good song should never be retired because of the reasons you stated. (imo)
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Hop On Pop
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5/9/2008 12:09:31 PM
I have a couple of songs about my wife.
And, at any rate, it's an old song and I'm a bit sick of it anyway.
She doesn't stop me from singing it. I just know that it bothers her, even though she says nothing. Plus, our relationship began in the tumult of the wake of that relationship with Carlen. It evokes bad feelings on both our parts. And, I will not go into it any further, as I don't want y'all to start charging me $100 an hour in shrink fees.
;-)
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Jack Heinicke
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5/9/2008 12:54:32 PM
LOL, I'm gonna try that artisitic expression and honesty in my work thing with my wife when it comes to those songs written about those before her. And when the eyebrows raise before the cast iron skillet takes flight I will also cry out for much needed mercy and understanding that yes dear I am an idiot.
Artisitc expression and honesty in my work take a back seat to peace in the home and respect for my wife. Just a thing I have about being sensitive to her feelings and wishes. Call me co-dependent but my "art" isn't anywhere as near as important as she is.
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Jack Heinicke
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5/9/2008 1:05:06 PM
And as for the song, I agree that the vocals could come up some but I've always been a fan of the Mats and Husker Du and I love that sound and approach. I don't agree that everything has to have pristine production and in fact think that certian styles benefit from a rough around the edges recording/mix. And I think this song falls into that category. I somewhat miss the punk-ethic-passion in music and find myself listening to stuff from that time because of the intense feeling in that music. Don't get me wrong I also love greatly painstakingly produced stuff as well as long as there is some real feeling in there and not lost in the process.
We all have differing opinions and they're all valid. It's eventually up to your own ears and heart.
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